After watching the product all the way through with peers, tutors and Tom, I discussed what they felt should be maybe changed or added to the film to create a more effective product:
- The Music in the Second Half - I felt that the music in the second half wasn't very fitting to the emotion conveyed and for some reason it just didn't fit very appropriately into the film's soundtrack. To address this, I decided to replace the song with Coldplay's "Paradise" which I felt had a more lyrical connection as well as a very charming and uplifting tone. To fit the song appropriately into the space of the other, I edited the song in GarageBand reducing it to around 1:40.
- The NERF Gun Scene - Tom didn't feel comfortable with this scene, saying he personally felt it appeared as if he was bullying his brother, I explained to him that the scene was meant to convey happiness and a healthy relationship between him and his brother, so I decided to simply cut this scene to make him happier.
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